You are nuts! Nina, when are you going to learn?
First off, I commend you for sharing this with the rest of the world.
I will start with my critiques.
The hair is a bit too solid, however I have no clue how to avoid that, so that's the end of that.
Actually, that's all I have for critiques.
Now for the positives I see.
They eye is by far the best thing about this picture to me. It is beautiful and very well done.
Your porpotion in my estimation are on point. I don't see what's so out of proportion, it looks flawless to moi.
The nose is in my estimation very good. I like the distinctness of it in the way that it does seem to be more real in that it comes out more than looking 2D like most noses do in drawings.
The lips... goodness. lol i would kiss those lips.
The shading i think is pretty good. It takes so much damn practice to get that done. (believe it or not i have taken art courses and happen to know a lot of good artists) Just keep at it.
Overall, this is a damn good drawing. That's without considering the fact that you are nowhere near the peak in your talent or even passion. As you grow and mature, the minute things won't be things you keep critiquing about yourself solely, but also things you find yourself progressing in.
I say you should put more up here though. I know you have some ^^
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Poem: A Jimi original
Image: Mia's great work!